All Comments on 'Page Ch. 05'

Well worth the wait, please don't leave us waiting so long for the next installment. I had not realised that you have reworked the previous chapters so extensively, it is definitely better but is so changed that I recommend other readers to go back to chapter 1 even if they have already read it.

I'm really running of of compliments for this tory of yours even though I hoped for a happier ending to this chapter, but drama has to be or the story will owe its edge. Now that his government and the Russians are after them all that is missing are some Chinese on their tail and the menage will be complete. But if his elections are the root of all this trouble why doesn't he simply withdraw, or did he already see what he wasn't supposed to? That the part of the story that keeps bug in me from the get go, as he basically didn't do anything that would provoke such actions.

Aside front hat the story is once again perfect with just enough of sexual action, enough spy stuff to put Bond to shame, meaningful dialogue I can enjoy reading, fast yes adequate pacing and a loving romantically relationship that keeps developing in the right direction.

No surprise really that I have to give you another 5*!

With a cliffhanger like this please don't leave it so long before the next chapter and it's really time why we had a clear idea this is going on.

The tweaks we've made to the previous stories do not change the story, they change the way we told the story. Yes, we've fixed rough areas, but mostly it's been typos, improper verb tenses and pronoun inconsistencies. The largest rewrite occurred on Page 1 of Page. If you're familiar with the story, rereading anything else would just be a refresher. -MM

... please don't wait too much to post the next chapter. Can't wait to find out what is going to happen afterwards...

It will be interesting to see who the team who took away Page was. It wouldn't surprise me if they were Page's team and the 'Nooo' was simply that Page did not want to leave his brother behind...

Great story but way to long of time between postings of chapters

Hell of a good story. Months between chapters makes it hard to pick up where you left off, tho. The intrege and whats next is building a hunger for more steps. Good. GP

Damn it right at the end it was getting interesting cant wait for the next chapter please hurry I cant wait to see what happens

A nice chapter. I hate cliffhangers though. Hope the next chapter comes soon.

I can't wait no more... Next chapter !!!!!

Great chapter and I'm anxiously awaiting the next one. Ry definitely needs some training as he violated Rule 3: Keep your finger off the trigger until the sights are on your target.

So far things are going well. Like others, I have some issues with the amount of trust he is giving to an 18 year old sister when he is 27. Even with her IQ, eidetic memory, and training she is young and inexperienced. She even mentions she hasn't been trained for this. She needs to come clean, or something has to change soon or things will go badly.

The description says she is taken, but it seems more likely she was saved while he was actually the one taken. I can't wait to read the next chapter and hope to see his training continue. He has picked up quite a bit for it only being a few days.

Don't kill him. Please.

Fantastic read 10*

I found your story so involving that I found myself hurrying through the sex scenes (which were great by the way) so as to return to the story.

hmm

so, obviously from looking quickly at the next chapter, he gets Page back but, i honestly didn't see this coming.....

Was waiting for the inevitable fight where the 100 lb woman miraculously takes out an adult man with some “precision strikes”. Just awful and hilariously unrealistic. Maybe if she was a 220 lb behemoth of a woman it might be possible but a 100 lb woman? The average man could literally throw her across a room with ease. Women are not involved in combat and men/women do not compete in combat sports against each other for a reason. Stop using bad Hollywood tropes.

So it has finally occured the whole purpose of the plot to find out just what is going on from both sides of the action may the just prevail. Looking forward to chapter 06.

Brilliant!

This is really exciting!

Wow this story just gets better and better. Can't wait to see how it all pans out. Excellent. 5/5

I don't understand why they returned to the condo in the first place. Getting them to another safe house should have been high on Aunt Reba's priority list. 4/5

Again, the drama and mystery keeps the curiosity going and it has my attention. And, again, i am loving the growing relationship between Page and Ryan. Very sweet, romantic and tender. Top notch dialogue between the couple. 5🌟