All Comments on 'Paige Ch. 09'

by psylic

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Needs careful handling now

I liked the original characterisation and the uncles obvious flaws gave a credibilty to the story. Now the aunt has arrived and he wants her as well? Does Paige have any friends or relatives he is not going after. Also could have benefited from a re-read. You mention Sarah the dead mother going out, I take it you meant Paige but it interupts the flow when reading. Overall this has been an interesting incest story and I hope you can keep it going. Thanks UK Cynic.

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