All Comments on 'Painful Hotel Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Mostly horrified, slightly aroused. Kept waiting for the gotcha! It's a role play set up-but then it wasn't. Intense ans well written.

beebatbeebatalmost 10 years ago
Good nonconsent story

I loved this! You stuck with the nonconsent, dealt with a really tough story, in a really hard way. Stuck with it, didn't back down, or soften it by changing it into pretend, or role play, and do that surprise twist, like oh kidding actually this is my boyfriend and we arranged it. Really good job, loved the story, loved the use of toys, all of it. Two thumbs up.

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