All Comments on 'Painting Donovan Ch. 05'

Not sure about the threesome with the best friend but I sure love the end - Don worried about a dick being big when he's got the largest!

I love this story! Always such a treat to see a new chapter has posted. Which of the brothers would I fuck? As a somewhat straight female with a total fetish for gay men, I want to be JC in the story and have both of them - together!

New chapter and a good one, too. JC worries me, though, with that bit about blackmailing from earlier in the story.

Well, I'm female, but if I could be one of the characters I'd be Darren! Hehe, I've liked him from the start. :)

And the two of them are gonna raise their nephew? How will they explain their relationship to the kid? They'd ave to cut all ties with family and friends and start fresh. I'm interested to see how you're gonna resolve all this.

In other news, the incest part should freak me out, but it doesn't. Probably because it's fiction.

love it

hot story! Best part so far... I'd do both brothers, 3 way, though I'd want them to fuck me

And want more of it

Heheheh, waiting for part 6... >:3

I agree with nomoretears00. JC worries me. And the kid... I can't wait to see how you spin that.

I'm loving this story, but i was MAJORLY disappointed that they didn't keep to a monogamous relationship. Don wanted one in the beginning and he was very jealous ( maybe you forgot that) The possessiveness was sexy.

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Now it just seems they'll have sex with anyone. And having sex with this guy at the time they did it made it seem like they were paying him back for the trip. It was hot and totally romantic when it was just the two of them, now... it's getting to be like a lot of other Gay stories; the guys keep inviting people into their bed until nothing is special about their relationship.

I was aware of the downside romance-wise inherent in a threesome, but ultimately I decided the opportunities it created - easing Don into the bottoming and providing a third-person perspective into their intimate relationship - outweighed the risks. With that said, I think it highly unlikely that there will be another sex scene involving anyone other than Darren and Donovan. So whether you loved it or hated it, the threesome was a one-off thing that won't be repeated.

Your probably my favorite writers on here, if not, one of my favorites; There's a lot of depth in your characters, and it always feels like your there, in the actual room with these characters; The bedroom, the shower, the airport stall, or any other scene in the other chapters posted.

I do think, that it should stay between the two brothers, only because that's what made this story special for me; For the brothers to be in an actual relationship was more one of a kind then anything else I've read in this Category.

Either way, it's a great collection of literature, and I always look forward to more works of yours.

I'm am on my knees in front of you bowing to your excellence! I have a favorite writer on here already but you are a very close second. Well let's say he's 1A and you're 1B. Anyway I always knew I loved gay porn (especially literature) but damn brothers? Its like the way god intended it. Keep writting, I'm anxious to hear about this vaca, the taking care of Owen (something tells me that Ashley is gonna discover her will to be a mother just as the boys are in the mind of being the boys parents ("hi uncle daddies") which will only add confussion and lushishness...), and how the relationship develops over time, there's no way they can keep this secret from Owen if he ends up growing up in their home or from everyone if ashley takes them to court. anyway, keep up the explosive (good didn't quite say it) work!

Please update this story. Pretty , pretty please :-). Else I might have to start painting Donovan myself; with body paints. Damn, those guys are hot hot hot.

Dear Gosh. This. Is. Amazing.

I would type more, but, I.. can't describe how much I've loved this series.

Amazing...feel free to continue this story :) no, wait, I order you to continue lol.

I like it. =) Please update soon. I'm curious as to what will happens next. Great story.

that is the number one read on this site....no other story has topped this....fanfuckingtastic....brilliant.....fuck ive never cum so often ..........best story and the top author....number one in my book.......i will sleep well tonight.? ....jonathan....lancashire....england....

It stops there?!

This is the best brother/brother incest story I've ever read. Totally hot. Please finish it.

just two words MORE PLEASE

The best in this genre!!!! I'm in love with your characters and the hilariously ironic ending. It still felt like a cliffhanger haha, so PLEASE continue this superb series!! :)

Love this story so much. Best I've ever read on here. Your a good writer :) please write another chapter.

I Usually Dont Like Incest Stories, But This Was Amazing.! Write More Please:)

Of all the stories Ive read, I like this series the best, I'm just wondering if you are going to continue this amazing story?

Hope you continue the series one day. And I'd really like a bit more background of how they became/realized they were attracted to each other.

please write more stories about don & darren. it's reallllyyyyy good.

What was he commissioning from the old guy that was made of platinum?

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That was so damn hot, please keep writing this!

Fantastic story! You are an amazing writer. Your story was very exciting and gripping. Lol. I've read it multiple times. Like one of the other people commenting, I felt like I was right there in the room with them. I sure wish I was. The way you told the story of brothers in a relationship, you made it hot and sexy. Great job!!!!

Please continue the story. I would love to know how much fun they had with JC in the Carribean.

And the 3some made it hotter still without losing the romantic element. JC is as close to being a 3rd brother as they're likely to get having all grown up together. Daddy has a shrewd idea what might be going on, as does Ashley, so including JC is the logical next step with surrogate brother /brother /brother incest. Yet to read the next instalment but expecting great things from you