by PairOfAces76
Very hot action, loved the realism with the warmup to first time anal, but the background story would be even better with a little more work. Like it a lot overall. Than you!
My biggest complaint, Ric and Richard are too similar of names. It made it difficult to keep track of the two.
They're all elevens, as far as I'm concerned - tens who swallow! There's also a couple of available asses -- so far -- and the guys haven't even opened their ass-cheeks yet!
Just get into it -- who cares about too-similar names or lack of background etc. Just go with the cum-flow and the fucking. It makes it better for wanking off all around !
confusing which character is being talked about ( Ric / Richard )