All Comments on 'Palace Life Ch. 04'

You might want to take a writing class. And make sure your stories make more sense because I know it is fiction. You don't need to scream it at me while I'm reading this shit.

Secondly think of the characters. They are the most important part of the story. Take a couple psychology courses. Again I know its fiction. You don't need to make me deaf with the unrelastic characters.