All Comments on 'Pale Painter Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Step mom is soon to be in trouble.

Do not most castles have peep holes and hidden passages.

Is Someone is going to find the truth and let the cat out of the bag. ::: Good start for another intriguing tale. Please keep experimenting. it works well. You could use a proof reader to clear up a few small English grammar errors

Hobomonarchy almost 7 years ago

Bravo

I must not understand writing well because I do not see a "experiment" here. Only your usual quality for intriguing writing. I have enjoyed all of your stories such far but I believe this one will be my favorite.

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