All Comments on 'Palomino Ch. 01'

I don't know why but I have a major soft spot for cowboys. This was a great first chapter, I can't wait for the next installment.

Please don't keep us waiting!

Great start, I really enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for more

Echo - Nice start, looking forward to the rest of the chapters. Good early development of three main characters, which is essential to a strong story line.

Love it! Please continue... AWESOME START:)

To my loyal readers: Ch 2 has been submitted! It should be published in a few days. I plan on posting a new chapter every couple of weeks.

Loses so much due to lack of an objective editor.

Average and cliched at the moment. 3⭐️

Nice beginning to this story.

Good start