All Comments on 'Pandora's Box Pt. 01'

I'm liking it :)

I really enjoyed this part, can't wait for more. I'm not a writer but think it needed the earlier chapters. Well done.

interesting so far. Just how far and, especially, to where Jason's victim will go is a question that will keep this reader eagerly reading and waiting for the next chapter(s).

I really appreciate the feedback, because this is my first attempt to really try to write one of these. I've read other works on here and every chapter has some erotica scene and I am trying to do something more than that. I'm not sure how the perspective changes will continue, but I think it will become more even now that they are together or eventually more from her perspective. Your feedback will keep me writing, because I was considering whether or not I was going to do anything else with it.

This has me quite intrigued. :)

Please continue this series, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Very well written!