by Ashson
Nicely written, nice lead up, nice finish by a very bad man and his very willing partner. I wish I'd thought of it first. My writing is a bit more crude and more to the point. I like your style. More please.
Make a series out of this one? Loved the styling more than anything, and the story was intriguing
It was very well written but lmao like...keep your little tips in the parentheses to yourself. Please. As a woman, nothing is a bigger turn off than reading something that generalizes her gender. Otherwise, wow, awesome story. I loved the tone and your writing style is very promising.
'keep your little tips in the parentheses to yourself.'
These are not tips so much as an indication of how the man's mind works.
Some people do think that way.
I loved your little tips - always fun to read how the guys' mind is processing the action. You wrote a delicious story, thank you for sharing.
Witty, fun, clever, insightful, brilliantly worded prose, and you played on some of my deepest fantasies. Please, keep writing. You have such a skill. I earnestly look forward to reading more. :)
One of my favourites. And what a nice ending!
Keep it up friend