All Comments on 'Panther-Wolf Cub Ch. 02'

I think you could have benefited from another read or two. There were spelling and grammatical errors. Usually I ignore them, but when there are so many you must comment on them. I like the take on the story and maybe your next chapter you should use an editor.

I think something out that might help is when Kira is talking to her wolf to italicize or put in asteriskes as it got just a tad bit confusing.