All Comments on 'Panties Pulled Down by My First Man'

I don't know if you did it to be "artistic", or to stretch out a really short story, but MAN is it annoying as hell. It's like listening to someone who really wants to sound "profound", but has nothing to say.

Actually Epiphany the spacing is an artifact of my posting the story.

It didn't appear to have been carried over in the preview so I thought it had been processed out.

The double spacing in the Word version helped me compose the story.

I really loved to read it, dont let other people change your style. As it is your first story, I am very happy to read more of you. It is another style, but not bad.

Kisses Talisa

Wish he were in me too.

Thank you for the comments everyone.

I love it when people enjoy my stories and this one is the first I've ever posted here.

X

Finally a story where it is a loving and sensual story. This is how it should be between two looking for pleasure for both.

Thank you everyone who favorited my story.

Yes it's romantic and gentle.

Rough doesn't do it for me.though I know some people like it.

Such a quick short ride, yet fully satisfying. If only I was the one that was being impaled.