All Comments on 'Panty Fantasy-Hurricane Kate Ch. 01'

I wanted to read it as the title interested me. Your use of language is just too poor for me to tolerate. You may have some great ideas, but they will never reach an audience if your writing does not reach a certain basic standard.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and don't stress about the odd mistake - there's a lot more to telling a story than perfect sentence structure...

Liked the premise. Hope he gets caught and found out. Keep going.

I must say I'm perplexed by the "basic writing standards" comment. As a published author in the real world, I think my work ranks in the top portion of work here on Literotica and I've never been accused of poor basic writing skills. If I do have the odd grammar error, I can't imagine anyone would be so sensitive as to be unable to read the story. I guess since no examples were given I can't take it seriously.

I enjoy reading and the test of a good story is wanting to turn the next page. Ignore snob comments, how you write is perfectly fine....so, tell me...what happens next?