All Comments on 'Pappa's Pet - Her First Test'

by DaddysAnne

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spoiled_bratschespoiled_bratscheabout 14 years ago
Lovely

Well written, absorbing, arousing. I'll look forward to more.

willingreaderwillingreaderalmost 14 years ago
Well done, but rushed

I think your writing is really phenomenal. This story did feel a little more rushed than the other. I wish there was more detail to it. It was over too soon!

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