All Comments on 'Parabola'

Anonymous,

Thanks for your feedback! This story was written for a friend who happens to enjoy being swallowed as a climax to these sort of stories. I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy it; I did tag as "vore/softvore" so that hopefully those not interested in that sort of thing would be able to avoid it. I would more than welcome any suggestions of different endings for stories of this type!