All Comments on 'Paradigm Shift Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Why?

Can't you try writing something different for a change ? Same same ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
5 for a great story

good effort and content. eat it annony

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
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arrowglassarrowglassabout 8 years ago
I have been a fan for some time!

Like what you write about...keep it up...keep 'em coming!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

A couple questions that seemed to be missing (or I missed or maybe are coming up) but everyone seems to be aware of what is/has been going on so outside of KC, why hide what everyone else is up to until being caught (other than trying to manipulate him through flirting/sexual offers)? There are references to how long couples have been involved in the lifestyle which implies KC was not only aware but could have been involved, behind Matt's back, longer than he knows. That would be cheating. The lies, dishonesty, disrespect and broken trust would be near impossible to build on. Really how can he trust anything anyone says? Turn a blind eye and become complacent basically? I get it's 'fantasy' and where it's headed but 'reality' is in such strong contrast, it's hard to accept.

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A note on Porn Star next door. I keep getting kickbacks from Literotica without knowing why. Persevere: I will edit chapter by chapter until they deem it acceptable to publish. It just won't be as good. A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A ...

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