All Comments on 'Paradise Found on a Deserted Island'

Excellent thus far. I don't see too many aviation related stories and this one is great (other than I don't think too many guys could push a loaded Duke in the sand!). Can't wait for the next installment. Is this going to be a Flight of the Phoenix ending?

A very interesting premise. Hope it all works out with no green monster.

Thanks for the encouragement, more too come.

(To anon above: good comment about moving the Duke. The sand was compacted. almost like being on a ramp. Hard to do, but this is fiction after all,)

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....if you stopped there, you'd have half the readers furious and demanding at least one other realistic installment.

But this is fantasy, is it not? Then why not let them live happily with their stud and populate the island? I could think of far worse ways to finish out my life.....

But , having pulled a 340 across soft ground I can tell you it takes 3 men and a quad with a winch to move a twin on anything other than pavement.

I repeat, Don`t stop now. the suspense is killing me. LOL. Good job.

I would really like to read more .... good writing and please continue

Good outline and concept. So, you have set it up all nicely so I really want to see where you take this well written story. However you develop it - please do continue.

Please write a followup to this. Much potential in this situation.

YOU obviously have anxious readers who love your story and want to know more. Endless chapters are waiting to be written (and READ!). You have a winner here and lots of fans of your hot, hairy, ladies. Whew WHO !!!!

I love the idea of one man alone with many naked, willing girls on a deserted island to fuck, so good call on the plot idea. I wish many more would choose that idea.

But my problem with your story is that the guy may be too old with 50+ years... well, okay, with the old age may come the experience, but you could have chosen a 22 year old stud with much experience too, it is just a story, yours at that.

Well, whatever, and you haven't updated the story for 1+ year! All you wrote up until now were their crash landings and a bit lesbian sex, so just the prologue so to speak, no actual sex! *sob*

When r u going to continue the rest of the story?

When are you going to finish the rest of the story?

Why have you not continued the rest?

part 2 please!!