All Comments on 'Paradisio Pt. 01: Mere Mortal'

in detail, not a thing left out. Great anticipation of arrival, wonderful description of what he did before and what he saw upon arrival, and great oral. Amazing, and that's a 5. Look forward to more.

Most interesting start to a powerful, powerful fantasy. You have certainly stimulated my curiosity and imagination of both what I would choose if I were on such a trip and which direction this adventure might go. I will be looking for many more chapters and I will be very careful which advertising banners I explore.