All Comments on 'Parfum Ch. 01'

The story develops nicely and is 'believable.' You've given us a bit of a feel for the characters and their feelings. At this point, I see a lot of potential, and look forward to reading moew.

So far it's interesting. It has potentiel. Perhaps he will create a love perfum after the horny one.

Good start on this one but not sure if it really a MC story

Can't say I expected the racist perfume ending! This story definitely has potential, keep it going!

Very nice and interesting start for a story!

Hope there are more chapters to come!