All Comments on 'Park Interlude'

Good job getting in detail. You accomplished it in a fashion that didn't take away from the story but drew me into it further. You may want to have another proof reader as there were a few punctuation errors, but good read and I look forward to the next chapter.

Is there a story to go with the sex.

The story was ok. Could have been longer.

Look forward to seeing where this one goes....

Many Feathers

I would love to read more of this sexy couple

Fail! How did this relationship come to be? That is the turn-on not so much what they do after. *

Please keep up the writing

Well written, nice story. Nice well-rounded dirty sex.

Please include at least one female with a long, full, dense (sprawling) bush in future stories.

Not all females, especially more mature ones must look like little children.

More episodes and/or more stories please. Thanks.

O.O.

Public sex is such a turn on. It sounds like his slutty mommy really needs his hard rod pummeling her depths. It would be nice to hear how she likes his young rod fucking her throat too, gagging her and causing her saliva glands to ejaculate all over his hard cock.

Your "son" knew what you wanted and what he likes to do.maybe "mom" will take charge of his body.

Great length with useful preamble.

I don't know if this follows from a previous story, but it works well as it is. Unlike the other comment 'FAIL' I think this worked perfectly, we don't always need, or even want, the history.

Nice pacing for such a short story. Interesting to read about sex from the female perspective.

Perhaps I'll be able to write more complete or coherent comments later. Right now, I have to scurry away before you find me hiding in the trees, stroking.

Your stories so hot and real, feels like I am there watching xx

You mixed past and present tense together in this scene. Might be a minor point, but it shows sloppiness that can lessen the enjoyment of the story.

I didn't vote any stars, just wanted to point out that error so you can improve on the writing.

I love oral and your description really got me going. Good job. 5 stars

Makes me so horny thanks x

I really enjoyed rubbing one out to this.

I think this is so hot. Wonderful story. xoxox

Nah...Just another POS supposed to shock us?