All Comments on 'Parker's Story Ch. 04: First Date'

Your building this nicely

I just found your story and read all of it that is written so far and have to tell you I am hooked....

I can not wait to read more. You are a very talented writer!

Sucked in and checking everyday for the next chapter. Are you planning on finishing? Hope all is well! You have a great story and plot and I'd really like to see where it goes.

I'm so hooked. You are a great writer and I'm very picky. I love the characters so much! They are completely relatable to my own sense of humor. PLEASE do not stop writing this!

So excited to see where this story goes! I was instantly hooked.

I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. (I know I said that before, but I mean it this time.) Hope people are still interested in how this story continues.

Thanks.

Hope you write more! Well written and paced.