All Comments on 'Parking Lot Encounter'

Your story is sooo hot, I got hard reading it and at the end, almost came in my panties. Keep on writing, you do it very well!!

Very, very hot. I really enjoyed reading this story and just wanted to compliment you on a job well done.

beautifully written. Just like I was there.

You wrote a great story, but the title was a little confusing. I was under the impression that "our little couple" would have made "it" in the "Parling" (Parking) lot instead of waiting to get to his appartment. They could have first met there via "the rolling can of peaches", but that was okay, too. The other thing was the passing of bodily fluids from one to another was a little much, especially in our day of AIDS, but everybody has their own thing that gets them "off". Other than that, I found your story very sexy, and I hope that you turn it into a series.

Wow, what a whirlwind of great unabandon, uninhibited, sensuous sex!

Well written and enjoyable.

belivable--I was once picked up by an older woman--However the sex (Which I remember every detail of to this day many years later)was not nearly so extensive.

Very hot...every young man's dream. The way it starts and goes from there begs for a part 2.

story. I love the way you write. I'm as horny as kansas in august...you have a lovely style...as Oliver said, 'more?'

You are the hottest fucken writer on this sight, and probably other sights as well. If these stories are true, you are a wet dream. If these stories are created in your mind, then you are a wet dream. You blew my mind with this story

A well written story that sensually satisfies. Good Story!

Great story, flowed very well. Plus, I love the picture on your profile...you have a beautiful pussy. =)

It is so disheartening to note that you have not written in so many years now. But I keep coming back for the old ones, revisiting them, and never being disappointed with them. Your stories, your writing is like those recurring fantasies of mine -- they always work. Your uninhibited, articulate and sensual style, with just the right build up, is equisitely erotic and arousing. Please do write more. I would love you to do one with an alluring older, maturer lady with perfumed cleavage, maybe some handcuffs, and a lot of verbal teasing...

Would love to meet an older lady like Joan, she could comfort

me any time, what a lucky lad was Jake

WOW. That was really hot.

Joan, you're a naughty lady but you knew that, right? I love your stories.

Bill

Very sexy story. Reminds me of a milf who seduced me when I was 15. She was having a Halloween party and invited me in, took me to jer room, and taught me a great deal.

Thanks for the sexy read.