All Comments on 'Tommy is Grown Up Ch. 01'

Please continue. It would be nice that all three families will have casual intercourse on the beach in front of everybody.

Great start, please continue.

What a great start. Looks like a winning story about my favorite things: Mom, dad and son. That is a formula for a wonderful story-line, especially if dad and son get a little one-on-one too. Cannot wait until the party begins and cocks and cunts get together.

I liked the start of your story. Please continue with those intimate moments between mother and her son

Mommy knows best

You used Tommy 128 times. You use Mom 218 times, without actually giving her name.

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Editor, editor!

Your writing could be so much better with an editor!

cute story. cant wait to red the next chapter

Only in fiction can you find a family of mature individuals without evidence of self-doubt, fragile ego, or self-consciousness. Only in fiction do the feelings of safety, security and love without reservation are displayed as a given.