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Amongst others -

“Oh! I forgot. I did have once change.” - ‘one’?

“It was being help al fresco …” - ‘held’?

Also, if someone had fucked her wouldn't there have been some 'liquid' evidence when she stood up? "I could still feel the heat in my loins." - nothing else??

Good job, as always. :)

Well written, interesting and hot. Thanks.