All Comments on 'Party Favors'

by 1965Squash

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Kitist02Kitist02over 8 years ago
Nicely done.

A little ragged, perhaps, but that follows when the sport involved is football. Nice development of Sabrina's enthusiastic character. I think the volleyball sport worked better. You accomplished more with fewer words with it.

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

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