All Comments on 'Party Installation'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Spoiled by the rather large amount of nonconsensual and unsafe activity. Flirting with dead in a ditch territory isn't set to me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Enjoyed it. A bit extreme but enjoyable.

JadestoyJadestoyabout 7 years ago
Too extreme

The unsafeness made it unenjoyable

Michael_Michael_about 7 years ago
I had hopes

I tried to enjoy this story but I kept cringing at how potentially deadly your scene was. Also the diuretic was unnecessary and took away from the story. Also indwelling catheters don't work like that.

sammy_808sammy_808over 3 years ago

i'm sorry i didn't see this story for four years. i hope you return to writing some day. :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Their lack of understanding at how easily they could have killed her ruined this for me; if they had checked on her safety and consent after installation, I would rate it higher. If they had checked she could still breathe after the piss I would also have rated it higher

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The lack of consent...they didn't negotiate piss play... she didn't consent to the son using her.

And they never once checked on her.

Fantasy only

appyBappyB12 months ago

So much of this was good and it is certainly well written, but if she "blacked out" with her mouth and nostrils covered in urine.... ? This wasn't just pushing her boundaries. Consent is SO important.

PonderingLifePonderingLife5 months ago

First version of this one is here: https://www.literotica.com/s/party-installation

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