All Comments on 'Party Mom Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Disgusting

This is a disgusting story. I hate stories in which women are degraded as in this one. A guy pimping his mom, now that is a really ridiculous idea. I suspect that the writer here wanted to fuck his mom but couldn't and has been ignored by the ladies, therefore he writes about women in denigrating ways. This is not a sex story, it is a hate story. This guy hates women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hotttt

Awesome story!!! I love it, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ideas for the next chapter

1> The mom could get tattooed and pierced (describe in detail ) with black cock emblems and alex's name.

2> She could get a makeover, since her hair keeps covering her face while giving a blowjob. So she gets her hair cut short into a pageboy style and dyed. She gets this done at a barber shop which the son frequents. She also asks the barber to shave her pussy on the barber chair. Then she fucks the barber in front of her son.

kaidmankaidmanover 12 years ago
rage

I hope the son gets some retribution on all the people who are messing with him because no man would put up with this shit for long and will eventually snap

Guy_FauxGuy_Fauxover 12 years ago
Great story... Glad to see you continue after so long!

It's great to see you back in the game after so long. I like where this story is heading, especially with her son possibly being forced into homosexuality. I'd like to see more, awkward interaction between the son and mom though without others around. This would add the sense that the mom's not doing all of this just for show.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
There should be more moments between mom and son

The mom should be also concerned about the son. They should have their talks and moments with each other. All this would make it seem more realistic. Maybe in the next chapter someone could hit the son; the mother gets shocked and runs to his protection. She leaves all of them and goes back home with the son. They have sex and some intimate time. She uses a pump to make his cock bigger and even plan on getting it surgically enhanced. Then she starts acting out the son's sex fantasies.

I also liked the hair makeover idea at the barber and asking the barber to shave her pussy. All this while the son watches.

shitfacedcockmastershitfacedcockmasterover 12 years ago
AWESOME!!!

thank you, ive been waiting so long for this, please make more, dont stop at ch.4 yet, make more, these are perfect for you, 5 stars, great job!! things are getting interetsing, im a fan of your work ;) you know what would be funny, if the mom accedently sucks her sons cock or a guy does to him, anyways keep it up, keep makeing these embaressing situations, let the mom eat some pussy too, like megans pussy, let megan talk to the mom about sucking her boy friends cock back at ch.1 and let the mom fuck the girl that jacked chad off

shitfacedcockmastershitfacedcockmasterover 12 years ago
keep it up with more chapters

oh one more thing, bring back sunny and josh too, i was thinking that josh was the mom's favorite, after all sunny and josh started this mess haha and make more awkward situations were the son leaves the room for a few seconds, and the mom is blowing some one already when he comes back in, kinda like when he saw the mom naked in the hot tub in ch.1 and like the mom eating sunny out in the van, or blowing the 2 guys in the house, or getting doggyd out the window,.... anyways, make more and more chapters to keep the storying going

shitfacedcockmastershitfacedcockmasterover 12 years ago
ideas for more chapters

do a scene were there at school and the mom helps out at the snack booth, and sneaks under a lunch table, and chad sees a kid moaning and squirming at the table, then looks down and sees his mom's head back and fourth, and also she does a bj under water in a pool and suprises chad again

shitfacedcockmastershitfacedcockmasterover 12 years ago

i think if you combine all of our ideas, with more chapters, it would be the hottest story ever!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Disclamer: Do not read!No Incest!

There s no incest in this fucking story.Just male humiliation.

PurpleMonkeyDishwashPurpleMonkeyDishwashover 12 years agoAuthor
A small comment from the author addressing some things

1. Is this story mean to women? Yeah, probably. But it's erotica; my story matter is about the humiliation of a man and the women around him. Sonny is pretty strong, but you're right, she isn't in this story.

2. About incest: I will probably never write a story about a son who wants to fuck his mom or a mom who wants to fuck her son. That's just not my MO. So for those of you who think this story is leading up to the big moment when they finally fuck, it's not going to happen. It's possible that he'll be forced to get a little into her lovemaking; maybe he'll have to prepare her oiling her up, or by inserting the stud cock into her with his own hands, but it will always been done either because he is being ordered or because he wants to worship the mom, not ever out of his own sexual desire for her. So that's not happening, I'm sorry. The reason I choose Mon/Son cuckolding is just because of that incest barrier. When a husband is a cuckold, he has desire for the wife so that he may enjoy watching her get fucked. The humiliation isn't as extreme as if the woman being fucked is someone who is still linked to him in a way similar to a wife, but someone who he could never even find attractive because of incest. Nothing against incest, it's just not my thing.

3. The category is called Incest/Taboo. There is absolutely an element of taboo in these stories, even though I've typically labeled them as fetish. To put them in BDSM would be wrong, since my BDSM is too light. To put them in Loving Wives would be wrong, even though most good cuckolding stories go there. Fetish is more correct, but it doesn't have the same audience that I think my text could attract. I'm sorry if you were misled by this, but it's still a taboo story and I think the category works.

shitfacedcockmastershitfacedcockmasterover 12 years ago

i know i comment alot but i keep thinking of ideas, at the new party those 2 guys that have her number cards, should show up, and also megan's boy friend too

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

i can not wait until part 4

chickenwingy85chickenwingy85over 12 years ago
another gem

extreeeemly hot. like you said in your comment the son isnt attracted to or going to fuck the mom which is one of the reasons i like your stories so much. your #2 in the comments really nailed it for me. look forward to future work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
cant wait for more

i love all of the suprising stuff the mom does, i love when she sat next to the 2 guys and they felt her boobs up, and how chad fell asleep and there was so many condoms, i hope you do more of this stuff in chapter 4, like how the mom sticks her breasts out so chad has to fix her bra even though he doesnt want to, and i hope you keep the mom all motherly, like how she always makes pancakes for every one, but i hope you will write the pages alittle longer. i always love that the mom doesnt think she's doing any thing wrong, and she stays clueless, and she think's its rude when chad interupt's, i hope you have some more of that in the next exciting chapter, i love the suprise cum on the mom, its hot to use your imagination on what she did when chad leaves the room, and i hope more accidental cum lands on chad, and i hope things lead to the mom fucking chad's room dresser lady, and i hope she fucks megan, and alot more people at the next party.

shitfacedcockmastershitfacedcockmasterabout 12 years ago
AWESOME DETAIL

i love the detail, im hopeing for this much detail in the next chapter, like the mom chugging the cum down her throat and you can see a big lump, and i like how, chad has to help the mom tittyfuck the guy, and she cant handle it and she is perrring and moaning with her lips up, and the guy shoots all over chad and his mom's lips and body untill you cant see her any more, this never gets old

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
HOT DIRTY MOM

I am one who loves the Hot Mom, butdoes NOT think that being nasty to the son adds to the story.

Having the son, rub his Mom down, or kiss her after theycun on her face, or eat her pussy out after guys cum inside her, would be ultra hot.

Mostly, the son should BE EXTREMELY PROU, TO HAVE SUCH A MOTHER FUCKING MOM!-Eatandbemerry

shitfacedcockmastershitfacedcockmasterabout 12 years ago
IDEAS YOU SHOULD USE

how about, the mom almost has to fuck chad cause every one keeps saying, why dont you fuck your mom? and chad doesnt want to, and the mom agrees to but then the mom sees his dick, and every one laughs... and have some more scenes where the mom is over protective, like chad is about to fuck a girl for the first time, but then his mom is not ok with it.. then she fucks the girl..... and how about the mom turns megan bi, cause megan is interested in her porn, and how about the mom's boobs keep awckwardly touching chad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please consider these ideas for the next chapter

1> The mom could get tattooed and pierced (describe in detail ) with black cock emblems and Alex's name.

2> She could get a makeover, since her hair keeps covering her face while giving a blowjob. So she gets her hair cut short into a pageboy style and dyed. She gets this done at a barber shop which the son frequents. She also asks the barber to shave her pussy on the barber chair. Then she fucks the barber in front of her son.

Her son is absolutely against all this. He feels so sad when his mom gets the tattoo and haircut.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
God damn it.

Plot is unrealistic and forced, as is the awkward dialogue. It doesn't sound natural. And I'll say it again, the kid is pathetic. Where is his dignity? And the characters are hard to sympathize with, since they have little to no redeeming qualities. This all made for an unjoyable story. I'm sorry PurpleMonkeyDishwash.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
good story

Very good story so far but I still think Chad should do more like kiss his mom's cum covered lips or stroke the other guy's cock more,also I like the fact the young girls "care" about Chad and show their tits and Jack him maybe chad could clean up one the girls after she is a cum "dumpster" mom too

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
yummy story

I would love to watch a big muscular black man fuck my big booty latin mother. Not like a man fucks a woman, but from behind like a dog fucks a bitch. Bareback, naked, on all fours while hes on his knees, slapping her fatty butt cheeks with his hands and balls as he makes her call out his name and as he tells her how pathetic i am and how i am a little bitch. It would be great if he even referred to her with me, as his bitch

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Cheating girlfriends, promiscuous moms, cocky bullies, oblivious wimps... This is what I write about. Don't comment on my stories telling me to go kill myself or that my characters need to grow some balls. I don't like happy endings, and I don't like incest. I'm on ImageFap h...

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