All Comments on 'Party of Five Ch. 07'

it was another awsome sotry. can't wait for the next chapter.

JUST PERFECT! I LOVED THE TIMING OF THE WHOLE SERIES AND THAT YOU IGNORED OTHER READERS COMMENTS TO HURRY UP. I THOUGHT EVERY JOKE HAD BEEN USED UP OVER THE YEARS, BUT THE LINE ABOUT USING A CELL PHONE TO CONTACT YOUR PARTNER WAS HILARIOUS. THANKS TJ

I have loved the series so far and have particularly enjoyed the slow build up of the sexual tension among the charecters. Everything is very believable and has flowed very well from start to present. I can't wait for the other chapters!

it's not how many penises and vaginas are rubbing against each other, or how big or small they are, but how emotions, ambivalences, the struggle, the wits and humor, and other taboo but erotic thoughts are played out, in a closed and intimate situation, that is the fuel for eroticism

for example: someone's story of having oral sex with a prostitute who has had tons of sex with strangers on a daily or weekly basis would likely have little or no impact in us

but someone else having oral sex (even if it's just deep and erotic kissing) with a very close family member, a friend, or someone intimate like that and doing it for the first time --- NOW THAT would

be considered very erotic, because of its very forbiddeness. of course, if the author's able to write well in terms of sadness, humor, silliness, wits, etc. then its what we're looking for, as readers, as the audience

i have not commented until just finishing reading all 67 stories. i find it difficult to belive that you are not much older than you bio states. you write with a maturity that astounds me. there is an air of sexual tension that builds steadily, almost like the understated progression in an alfred hitchcock movie. this is great writing from every aspect. i supect any few mistakes in spelling or grammar, are typing errors, not any shortage of knowledge. please coninue this story. i suspect there are many more facets of these relationship to be explored. i am sure you are more than equal to the task.

I had decided to make no further comment until the end. But. You deserve a prize, a medal and unreserved praise for just that one line - "like a stray cat left outside... had come home again to a dish of warm milk" It was somehow incredibly sexy and dead funny at the same time without any smartass overtones. Brilliant

Excellent read! My 3rd time rereading the chapters! Nice! - xenocide

Quality will out. The dick in the mouth bunch have finally skulked off. This is turning into a great read. Good show.

loved the buildup of the characters...great job :)

...buildup to their sex and great detail about his building orgasm and sensations; this is something too many "writers" on here miss and rush through. Keep that level of detail with that.

'"OK," said Josh, wondering if there would be this much work every time.'

...poor baby, had to take the used condom out to the trash, wah! Lol.

'"How dumb do you think I am?" Josh replied.'

....ummmmm.... ;)

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