All Comments on 'Party On Ch. 04'

by Sensualist2

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wonderful Writing

I thoroughly enjoyed all four chapters, not just the story line, but you command of the language.. You choice of words enhanced the story and gave me the wonderful impression of listening to you tell the story to me personally. I look forward to more of your work. Thank you.

reader_3634reader_3634over 8 years ago
good story

Petty it stopped short with so much potential to continue.

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