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by maxpriapic

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
"UUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHH!!!"

You've used caps to show emotion then wrecked the line by doing "UUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHH!!!" to it when the simple yet effective "UH!" works without insult to readers.

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