by colleenslittletoy
What is happening to the average red-blooded north-american male???
Stop writing if this is all You can do.It was not even worth the time I took to read it!!!
A sequel detailing your household servitude with all the dirty details please!
Good story. Not surprisingly, a story like this, even though it's in the Gay Stories section, somehow draws the time and attention of people who think it's sick. Of course, they spend their time reading it and (probably) beating off to it. Ignore their criticisms. The complaints that the story, or the writer, are sick are just their strange masturbatory devices.
I would prefer a little more detail of the sex - extending it a little more but on the whole it was a good story. Keep writing.
Great story i got really into it pictured it all as it was happening.I would love to read more of the exploits of these two in the future.Thankyou
Nothing in your writing convinced me that he would behave like that. Which made this whole thing a waste of time to read.
The good thing about girlfriends is that they're easy to dump and it costs you nothing. Like any man would behave like that or accept her actions. What a bitch. Even for fiction, this was ludicrous.
PUTRID VOMIT, HAVE A CAN OF IT SICK FAGGOT !!!
His Girlfriend? Story is; Party with Wife and her lover... When did she become his "girlfriend"? This is supposed to be a story of his wife? Paulo is the lover for sure. I gather that Bob is bisexual and his dressing up was for the benefit of the Boss Also his "wife" breaking him into cuckoldry.I admit, I loved the story. .