All Comments on 'Pass or Fail'

Nice story development, good ending, leaves room for an additional story.

honestly you could base a whole series off this, but i am really only leaving a comment over that negative feed back you got, this was good and dont let anyone tell you different.

The three pages kept me excited. I loved the two girls getting involved. I loved his little twinges of guilt.

I agree with other posters: the story is certainly not too slow. The setup is appropriate, and not skimpy like too many stories on this site. The sex itself is delightfully detailed and surely a common fantasy.

Didn't like the ending should have ended before the last scene, but the rest was that good you still get a 5

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