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by Pholkie Phred
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Anonymousalmost 18 years agoa fun quickie :)
the story was short enough to reflect the quickie, and it wasn't bogged down with a lot of dialogue.
there were a lot of visuals, which is usually lacking in other stories (by other authors).
pass me a grapefruit! :)
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