All Comments on 'Paternal Fruit'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great Stroy

What a story! Anyone who is a dad-son lover will love this story. Dad really fucks his young boy and makes him his own fucker. So wants his love hole filled with daddy's cock and he gets exactly what he wants. The spunk really shoots when daddy gets his gun.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Oh my, yes

Really great read

So nicely done!!

Except I hope you're not done 😜

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More PLZ

Plz continue this story, I'm left envisioning the next several chapters with a wanting desire :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
WOW

Dad seems a very sexy man. Good sized cock and balls, and knows how to pleasure his son. Son is no slouch as he knows how to pleasure dad too. Give dad some body hair please!

Always wanted to think of my dad in this way, but he was older and heavier. Other guys' dads always seemed sexier, even other guys' older brothers. Had a good few blow jobs with other guys' dads and older brothers -- especially big dicks and hair on the chests and abs!

JayKenwayJayKenwayalmost 7 years ago
Fuckrod

What an awesome word. I might have to yoink that one for my own stories.

AlexDancesAlexDancesover 6 years ago
Amazing story, so much passion and love!

I love that this story is about love and desires they both have had but only now act upon. Even as they go for it for the first time, they check on and off to be sure the other is okay and truly enjoying it, that they aren't in pain, that they are in pleasure....

How much they truly love each other....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
awesome

Man you know how to describe a guy being fucked ! The boy's pussy finally got well filled by his dad and i'm sure it will be a regular hot item from now on ! Hope you write when the son gets to fuck his father.......it's obvious the older man will want it !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Keep it up!

Would like to read more as the story continues. Would really appreciate a hairy chested dad however.

Playful4BearPlayful4Bearabout 3 years ago

Very well written. The description is poetic, full of sexiness, love , paternal love!. Very sweet and romantic but sexy and exciting nonetheless . Kudos to the author!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is an exceptionally well written, carefully honed story. It deals with the fantasy of the dad finally acquiescing to his lad’s desires. Although he needs to be seduced, the dad turns out to be a powerfully sexual animal and a passionate lover.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved it need more continue please well done

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Translator & bilingual documents author abroad. I write prose as a creative outlet and break from working with content whose focus and form is decided for me. UPDATES: New Story Jul 2017. Title: Paternal Fruit Learning the Ropes: Ch. 2: Up for your reading pleasure and over...