by taylorsam
...those days... Some authors on here can sure write about true to life events... Keep it up...
I enjoyed your story. It was very believable. I found myself wanting to know more about how the ladies were dressed in the bar, etc... I am looking forward to the next installment of the story.
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sailawayfree
I like the story but the numerous grammatical errors were very difficult to ignore.
Good start. Previous commenter, what is this an English class?
This would not work for most people but if you married the wrong guy and wanted someone else W.T.F. get divorced after the kids get a little older.
Not many husbands really want a full time slut for a wife, but if you are drunk all the time it may not matter as much. Good luck with this lifestyle, keep telling each other how much you really do love them, you might start believing it.
I'm loving it! I actually started getting hot and masturbated a bit while reading!
Is this story fictional or is it an actual experience?
Too many stories have the couples going from 0 to 60 in the second paragraph! I like the way you are building things up slowly.
A real cock-raiser.
It amuses me to see the comments from people who take pornograhpic fiction seriously and try to psychoanalyse the characters and point out their flaws.
Hey it';s just a story--enjoy it!!!!
We've known couples who started this way. Fun story!
Starting slow can be a lot of fun. It's like never-ending foreplay, then you fuck! Enjoyed the story.
Women slightly different physically, men too similar, and spare me who has the bigger cock
For me to enjoy stories on this theme they need to convince me that they are, at the very least, based on a true, real life experience. This one had the ring of truth to it. I loved it.
This seems to be a realistic scenario. Everyone is on board, fun for everyone, no cuck shit. Go for it!
A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.