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arrowglassover 6 years agoThis story has my attention...like the tone and can't wait for what is next!
So....now here I am waiting for what's next...LOL!!!
Chief3Blanketover 6 years agoAh ha!
This chapter shifted back to being a story with a plot instead of a written romp in the hay. Very good, now it is worthwhile to read it.
bruce22over 6 years agoThe Baseline has been established.
We can now proceed, I hope. Though I admit that all options are open. When is he going to suffer a leg injury?
UltimateHomeBodyover 6 years agoOkay
Nice story, nicely written for the most part. Will keep reading, but for the life of me I cannot see any plot or direction for the characters or story. Perhaps you need more romps to make up for lack of plot.
loragassover 6 years agoFunny! I thought it had a plot, just an unusual one.
To me, the plot is the trials and tribulations of growing up and trying to figure out what you want from life.
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