All Comments on 'Patience'

by MrsSmith_Shhh

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent!

Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Wow...I really liked this story! It was well written and got me very hot. I would love this scene. Nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Now that was one sexy story!

I loved every word of it! Thank you, MrsSmith_Shh, for getting me all hot and bothered!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Wonderful scene, written in a great fluid style. Look forward to more!

be_mean_babybe_mean_babyover 11 years ago

I haven't read something this good on here for ages.. that was gorgeous: sexy and classy, beautifully written. Thanks for that.

MrsSmith_ShhhMrsSmith_Shhhover 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

..To everyone who takes the time to rate and comment. It means so much to me :) xx

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
Terse, tense...

excellent writing. You've captured it perfectly.

Quentin RileyQuentin Rileyover 11 years ago
Quality!

This work is concise and delicious! Well-written and, well...pretty damn hot! Very good read. I'll take more of this!

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