All Comments on 'Patience'

Pried is the past tense of the verb to pry. Prised open is correct for levering something open, so the author was correct to use that phrase.

Excellent writing, a good story! Ignore the dickless comments below haha.

Great story.There must be more to come from this hot trio.

Very sexy. 5/5!

Well written, but the prose reminds me of the term, " a bodice ripper", those novels about people caught up in the throes of perhaps elicit passion.

Nice to see an actual erotic story in this category for once. Very hot,

Dear Anna,

This was a very hot and entertaining story. Got me going early this morning. Hope to see more of your writings soon. Thanks for sharing.

Sincerely

Santacruzman

That. Was. AWESOME!

absurd shit.

For me. But this was believe able for the characters you wrote. No cheating, no disrespect, serious rumination. 5. Ignore your haters, OldBearSwitch

PS. Could you do a loving Femdom that is monogamous and not based on humiliation?

another illiterate WHORE posting cuck shit.

While I'm not an advocate of "the lifestyle" this particular evolution towards it touched on my personal hot buttons. The characters first communicated - if not perfectly at least somewhat well. They also were willing to take the slings and arrows of walking their talk, so they were honest in their dealings with one another (well, if not "totally" honest, at least sufficiently honest in that neither were attempting to "defraud" the other).

Someone else commented that the writing fit the "bodice ripper" mold, and I can largely agree with that thought. The sex was pretty well drawn, will certainly agree.

4* from me in an area in which I'm usually not a big fan.

Just a fucking piece of one sided garbage from word one.... Only a cunt would write shit this slanted, more cuck wimp shit......

well written, more please, ignore the negative losers, 5*

cuck shit.

consider yourself ignored

He does not take her up on her offer but let's her . Then no detail about the wife's exploit with the other ? Then wife sets up 3 way? Too disjointed for me 1 star.

Patience anon #1 you will get it some day. Good story and a lot of passion

Thanks.

Now they are just really considerate loving caring housemates, who enjoy a great sex life, I guess. But their bodies, their passion, their dreams, and their sexual memories, are no longer special. Why would the wife give her husband permission to stop being her husband, be so relieved when he declined, then commit the very betrayal her husband saved her from. And then the mercy fuck threesome just drives home her guilt and desperation to "balance the books." All she did was lower her former husband to her same level as selfish lusting slut. There may be some remnant of love in this relationship, but there is little trust, and no respect. The wife soiled their bed, then drug her husband into her shit. What love, what respect, what sacrifice.

Write it any way you want. In all likely hood the wife will get stiff nips for another guy somewhere some day, and maybe she'll ask again, or maybe she'll just presume he still "loves her enough" to allow her to shit all over him and their relationship, again. The marriage is already dead. Its just a matter of time before they notice the stink.

Fun, wild and free.

xoxo,

Di

Excellent read,well executed. Some commentator seem to "need" to find inconsistencies., I submit there is none, as stated Davi needed no information beyond the pleasure he gained from his reinvigorated wife's desire. It was that desire that spoke the volumes detractors greedily demand. The inclusion of Jennifer by Ryleigh further emphasizes her love for David. By including herself in this tryst she ensured Davi's complete abandon AND fulfillment. Magnificent read with a coherent "voice" that made masturbation while reading exceptionally satisfying.

Well constructed, fun read. 5 stars

Did his wife fuck that guy? I guess so. They were very open minded . I would of kicked her ass to the curb but that's me , I'm way to jealous to share and would never trust a person again who was in a committed relationship with me that wanted to fuck someone else. Trust is most important in marriage and once broke and found out it could never come back for me. I understand people that stay married for reasons like money or children until the time is right but the trust is gone it's gone

It's sad that a love so beautiful can be sullied by idiots who can't see what they have in a stable mate who loves them in kind.

fools fools fools

Well done passionate scenes, and the build up was superb for this genre. Keep up the great work.

Nothing was taken. All received was given by the other. You might not prefer that kind of relationship, but they discussed everything before they did it. The only uneven bit was her fetching her for him and kissing her. While that was technically not with his consent, it was understood as being more for him than for her. They were both surprised how much the women enjoyed each other.

This story was very well written. The word usage is far better than what is common on this site.

For the haters; this was all consensual between the two partners. There was no betrayal or disrespect. There was no regret or retribution. While it may not be your thing, what adults willingly engage in is none of your business.

Bravo!

I’d of kicked both their asses out so that I could packed my stuff. I would then do the financial thing, gotten a divorce lawyer, quit my job and left the area for good. She could now live with her lover or lovers. I would no longer have anything to do with her, ever!

Polyamory, open marriage is just more perversion that will never be acceptable to normal people.

This little tale wound me up when little Jennifer appeared on the scene - hot, Hot, HOT! Having confessed to getting a tad excited over the story - and the idea I'm forced to admit I'll never get a deal like that. My wife does not, will not, involve me in any of her escapades - either straight or bi. I have to learn of them sideways from eavesdropping like a nosy neighbor. Damn!

Those who try to have their cake and eat it too almost imvariably end up hungry and without cake. No good will come of this change in the fundementals of their relationship.

Never have I read such peak experience and the feeling of superior 'normality in a menage a trois. Tumultuous cresting and exhaustive and victorious afterglow. (...or is it the beginning of some thing more?)