All Comments on 'Patrick Ch. 09'

Stu is going to get his ass kicked by Patrick!!!!

I don't like Stu! I absolutely abhor men who cannot take no for an answer; that makes them look weak and desperate as hell! just sayin!

Good chapter. I so hope Stu doesn't attack Kevyn.Please please don't let that happen. Take that Linderrr,momma has spoken,

i just have to wonder who will get to deal with stu Momma bear or Patrick either way it should be a good time

stu just needs killing

Stu is a loser, but he is just the push Kevyn needs to get clear about her feelings for Patrick. She will have to come up with a strategy for handling him because he is going to keep applying pressure to get his way.

She'll become a stronger woman because of this challenge and I think it will ready her for Patrick's revelation about being vampire. I see many good outcomes resulting from the introduction of this rogue.

Can't wit to read on!!!

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Thank you for a wonderful update yet again. Please keep it coming gal. It feels like a good soap, all these stories. I'm hooked.

it's hard to detest Stuart when he's so witty. I love the update. Thanks.

stu is such a creeper. And no its not fair game when she already said "no"!! geez

He's a slimeball. Can't wait till you get rid of him.

Don't like Stu & I hope Kevyn can tell his silly ass to go on someplace other than her desk. WTH was up with winking at her in front of the class too? I mean really? How incredibly stupid can you be?

Five stars obviously...

I don' trust Stu at all, it is real unprofessional to bad talk another professor. I am glad that Kevyn is onto that arrogant fool. I am so glad that she is missing her some Patrick, hell I'm missing Patrick myself!!! I want Stu run over by truck!! I love Maryanne, that is a mother lion protecting her cubs, and I love!!! Awesome!!!

I really enjoyed this update so happy that Maryanne and Katrina go through to Linda and showed her the light lol and how things are suppose to be. I feel bad for Patrick but with all that is going on with Kevyn especially now that she know that crazy scarey guy from the park is her new professor this is gonna make her wish for Patrick more and forgive him easier so now what she needs to do is let him know about how the crazy one used to creep her out at the park and now is actually his replacement teaching her class so that way Patrick has a heads up and will keep an eye on her and protect her even more so. Oh I can't wait to see what happens when he finds out looking forward to the next update so please update again real soon thanks!

Stu is cruising for a bruising.

I'm NOT WORTHY! I'M NOT WORTHY! I AM SLIME!!!!!

Oh poor Stu....the rest of your name will be come stuck, once Patrick puts his....on him...insert what ever word you want. it will happen

What a name like Stu the guy is already a loser ..lol I love Patrick and kevyn because their interaction seems the most realistic even when he told her about the rape. Love your writing and the contexts of your stories because their different however. Maryanne and Katrina needs to get off their high horses Maryanne needs to face that her sons are...were rapists plain and simple so in essence they would always be the greater threats even to pathetic women like Linda and Melissa and Katrina married her rapist so...yeah you cant cry morally outrage when you are laying up with someone who invaded you. again love the story but when some of the characters comes across as holy and peachy it is just laughable given the back story

I love her! I would love to sic her on Stu!

I think that Maryanne knows what her sons are and her anger at Linda is cos she didn't protect Melissa, she taught her how to take advantgage of men. Katrina was looking at it from a victim's point of view she knows all too well what it's like to be in that position and her anger stems from a mother putting her daughter in that position....just my two cents worth

Wow! Can make this story any better? Ummmmm, nope!!!!!! 5 starts.... wish I could give u 6

That Stu is a hag and slimmy. I agree with AlphaMarm though Stu is needed to help Kevyn get off her ass and back into Patricks arms. They have a rough road and Stu is just making her realize how much she really misses and loves Patrick.

On the other side of it doesn't Stu know when to stop? He's so agressive towards Kevyn I'm sure even if there was no one as a boyfriend she'd want nothing to do with him. He comes off like a stalker seriously and he doesn't care who knows. I think Kevyn is going to beat him with the baseball bat while Patrick holds him...lol Now that's a connection. lmao

eww stu is a sleaze ball an ive known a few in the work place totally needs a good smack down. An where the heck are his ethics flown out the window with his class probably lol. anyway cant wait for the next installment

Wow, Momma Maryanne put the fear of all fears into Linda. Maryanne isn't playing games. Don't mess with her babies!

Anonymous: If you haven't read Ethan yet, do so. You will get more background on the cause of the sons having the violent tendency. You will learn where it came from.

I mean...REALLY?!? Do you enjoy holding your readers in deep suspense?!? All sarcasm aside, you've got mad skills, Kal! Keep 'em coming!

a great way to show more of maryanne and how much she loves her family. i know that kevyn will contact patrick at some point, but this dr. brinkman so far is creep; he went from the annoying sort of creepy park guy that just won't stop, to creepy teacher that just might abuse his power as a teacher. he won't take no for answer, and has no respect for the fact that she's not interested and is now dating someone. she's his new challenge, and that is going to be a problem. i hope that kevyn tells patrick what's going on, or the school administration when and if she can change to the other class because of how uncomfortable dr. brinkman makes her feel. i don't get a good vibes about him at all, and i will have to wait and see if my speculations will come to pass. again thanks for another awesome chapter.

oh and i hope that linda doesn't really remember how she found out about her daughter, because i can see that bringing about more problems.

Hope Linda remembers Maryanne's warning! Kevyn should tell Patrick about stalker Stu!

Stu is annoying. I can't wait for Pstrick to chase him off. I hope that Kevyn moves past this thing with Patrick. Great update!!!

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I've been re-reading your other stories since I've got to wait for the next Patrick update. Oh dear...I think I'm addicted...

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update really soon!

love the fire in her and their chemistry is sooo there. I can not wait for them to make up and make love for the full connection to come for them...

Damn that was a good showdown with Linda! I wouldn't want to cross those two. Can we send them after Stu, too. Lord, he iritates the smack outta me.

Poor Kevyn. And Patrick. The problem is he has his family and Estace to talk to. Kevyn is all alone in this... not that a BFF would believe her if she even had one to confide in.

~Bluegardenia

The LADIES of the family are awesome. I am so glad that Linda got her butt handed to her. I may have been a mental fjob but it was worth the wait...LOL

It's getting hot in here!!! I love the confrontation. I knew that Stuart was Stu and I am thinking that he is VAMPIRE too... Well maybe not but I just have this feeling. Great Story!!!! WHERE IS THE BOOK??????????????

Maryanne and Katrina have just shown that they are no better than any other rapist, because that is exactly who they are also! They raped Linda not once, but twice!

First to "show her" what it is like to be almost raped. They violated her mind and plamted that image in Linda's head.

Second, they raped her mind so that she is no longer herself. They basicly made her into a slave to them by making her decisions for her. Add to the fact that Ethan just walked away when it was clear what they were going to do just shows that the rapist in him is alive and well.

All respect that I had for those three is gone as they are at best hipocrits and at worst rapists.

They showed her what almost happened to her daughter. This woman taught her daughter to use her body to lure in rich men. This woman's daughter almost destroyed Patrick and by extension Keven. She isn't their slave, they just stopped her from doing to their friend what she and her daughter have done to many others.

Linda is under compulsion to be a good wife and not of her own free will. What kind of man would like a wife like that? Carl is a grown ass man, he got himself into the mess and he should get himself out, whatever he'd pay would be cheap compared to living the rest of his life with a woman like that. I also do not agree that these two women are in any way to blame for Patrick's behavior, the moment he knew there could be a problem he could have withdrawn himself from teaching at any time, and would have still been able to pursue his lifemate. Rape is a serious issue, saying it was the way a victim dressed is a cope out. Prostitutes do not deserve to be raped. In order to make progress Ethan and family should take all responsibility for their behavior, especially if they're hundreds of years old, they should really know better. They're extremely rich and women more conniving than Linda and Melissa will always target them.