All Comments on 'Paul and Jane Ch. 01'

Excellent. Very funny and part of the humor gets expressed in your very good sense of pacing and timing. She's delightfully screwy and says just the right thing at the right time. Paul is good, too. So, well done!

If only there were more women out there who share and understand this fetish....

Really enjoyed the story, even if it kind of short. Lucky Paul, think he's going to have to up his game just to stay even with Jane. God, I remember growing up and getting a little excited at the most inopportune times and having to hid my hard on or the wet spot.

A charming story, well told.