All Comments on 'Paula's Retreat'

...but come ON! There have to be SOME standards.

Wonder what the first comment was about. I was happy to see a new story from DavidWatts (nice Kinks reference).

What a piece of sick and discusting garbage. Get back in the closet where you belong creep.

Ypu really asked for it, pal, but I liked it a lot.

All the characters in this story are shit, therefore, the story is SHIT

and dumb

It was highly erotic.When thinking about how paul and paula behaved when they first met during the conference and had been very formal and respected each other.In the end the way he had taken her and she responded,were animalistic and very very erotic to think about.....keep writing.....great work....

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anitha.sanker@rediffmail.com

Two wrongs do not make a right and as for her husbands desire to see her with other men she better ask him first!

Peice of crap! If I was the husband, there is absolutely nothing that would stop me from just running a blade across both their throats... and this is WHY NO ONE IN THE FUCKING WORLD EVER DOES THIS SHIT! Here, "take this tape and show your husband" so that he has all the reason in the world to just fucking kill me. That is what people do in real life, isn't it davidwatts. You're a fucking idiot, please stop writing.

I appreciate those who took the time to read the story, even though none of the criticism could be construed as constructive, or even literate in most cases. I even enjoy the comment below this. "Peice (sic) of crap" it may be, but I think you're getting a little bent out of shape over a story. I would like to add that, to those with minimal reading comprehension skills, it was clear that the husband was aware of the tryst. He helped arrange it. He wanted to see the tape, so the only real concrete statement you made was completely wrong.

Your quite right DW the husband really does want to see his wife have sex with other people and it seems that for the moment the wife is not sure but i'm sure that will change. Oh well just goes to prove you can read a story and miss things, although I do question the logic of watching your wife have sex with someone else but I appear to be in the minority in that respect.

Really enjoyed the seduction and the descriptions. No cliches. Excellent twist. Very creative but some of your detractors can't handle creativeness. They want to skim and wank. Too bad, they'll never know what they missed. Thanks, PW.

I loved this story and cannot imagine why you have so many negative comments. It is well written and very erotic. I suspect your negative comments might all be coming from just one jealous jerk. I am a 45 year old woman and have similar hair to your character. Two years ago I had a similar meeting at a conference with an old classmate that ended (without the extra woman and video) in much the same way. Please keep writing. I love your stories and was delighted to see this one. Karen

Do loving husbands and wives really want to watch each other fuck? After I read a few stories here I know that would be the last thing I would ever want, all the people I have talked to feel the same. The desire to watch your wife with another man, or to be a cuckold would be considered a mental illness,like Bi-Polar or depression, not some noble act of being a self assured,secure loving husband. Premise makes writing sex stories easy,but as a real thing I don't think it happens very often.

Thank you for the last few comments, which are precisely what the comment feature is for. Love it or hate it - make some contribution yourself to the site - and I thank you for that.

No, I don't think most people would want to see their partner having sex with someone else. I wouldn't. Wanting to see it and fantasizing about it are two different things, and that where I think these stories come from. The desire of John (the real life husband of Paula) who always wondered about seeing his wife with another man but DID NOT want it to happen. Seeing it in print is a safe and harmless way to have something akin to the experience without experiencing the heartache involved.

Thanks to all again for reading and intelligently commenting!

davy - That you are excited by pimping, watching and being a cuck is believable after all you spent a lot of time and energy on this sack of droppings. <P>

It stinks and taints you in the process but thats what excites you. As the futher addiction presses you futher and deeper to get the same high it ups the stakes to get there.<P>

Thats why you are where you are now - preaching self cuckolding, watching and self imposed male self disrespect.<P>

How exciting for you and the very few sicko's who need a shot to get it up at last.<P>

You have talent but don't care to use it for more than the very few like you. It is a choice isn't it - albeit a sick sad one. How sad you appear in your pride and self defense.<P>

Many writers don't realize that they are what they do - what they write.

Gee thanks. I have no idea what the fuck you are talking about, but thanks for reading the sack of droppings and adding your own as well. Writers are what they write? That's the dumbest observation I've ever heard made. Auto-biographers are what they write. This is fiction. Complete fiction. I have no idea where the cuck crap promotion is that you refer to, and I would enjoy a dialogue with the mentality behind that last post, but it's hard to debate with someone scribbling on toilet walls.

A sucker for honesty myself I could not but detest the monster proffesor. At the end, his 'apology' etc. and ya da ya da ya da rang hollow. I could not avoid feeling that Paula was at least to some extent emotinally abused and did not care for that part too much. <P>

As far as your considerable talent in story telling and weaving surprising twists along the way (evin if evil ones), no one can take it away from you!

I asked david to wtite this story. It is a fantasy, that is all. I like to 'see' my wife being fucked in a quite fictional situation. We have been married 23 years and never strayed. This story is just an extension of watching porn, using sex aids etc. the character are real and so therefore believable. It was well written and perfect as a story. Thanks David

My ex wife is Paula/ I love to hear about her getting fucked. she and I used to be in front of thr fire, my licking Paula's sweet dripping pussy. I want to hear about her being filled with cum, from younger mens thick cocks.

This one is not only a slut but a very stupid woman.

I'm surprised by all the negative comments. An extremely erotic, and interesting and (somewhat) original, story. Well done!

Thanks, ohio

I write erotica, too. I also read a lot of it. This is easily the best erotic short story I have ever read. I would love to see a sequel.

Angel

and another way. TK U MLJ LV NV

I, too, rather enjoy seductions, particularly older men/younger woman so this was fun and sexy to read with a couple of clever plot twists, rarely seen on this site. And, since you seem like a literate guy – a couple of comments. It was too long, took too much time to get to the good stuff. And the occasional graphic language from the professor seemed jarring when it’s more likely she would have responded better to a more sophisticated seduction. Still, a pretty good piece. And I’m not sure why all the negative comments. There are so many stories, anyone bored or uninterested can just move to something else.

A pathetic list of characters living sad lives. When deception is the key to getting laid, then you don't deserve to get laid. The professor/manipulator deserves to have his tool shortened. He gets off on deception.

what a slut paula was. hope hubby finds out so he can DUMP the whore.

Gave you a 5

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. asshole of LIT is on your birth certificate. father was a drunken bum named fag and mother a useless whore named asshole. .

like this one... Me = older than dirt... maybe without the woman with them... thanks for the flashback 5

I fail to see why John is emailing to Professor. Also how they knew each other after all of these years. The plot is not believable.

The Professor is the worse of the worse. A manipulator of people......possibly ruining marriages and playing mind games. I would like a better ending with him getting his just deserts.........

So I guess the way this ends that means the husband really was cheating and had done it before? I don't feel as bad. However, she cheated before she knew about her husbands affairs. SO she is just as bad as he.