All Comments on 'Paul's Awakening'

by AmyClarkBerand

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johntcookseyjohntcookseyover 7 years ago
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5 stars. Very nice. More please! Paul and Helen? Or maybe other snap shots. Either way - as a quick sketch or as a prologue, well done. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Five stars from me too...

He was a lucky man! She is delicious...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow 🙆🏾

This was an arousing story for sure but I enjoyed the characters as well. Would love to read more of your work 😜

AmyClarkBerandAmyClarkBerandover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I have a lot more work coming up, so please watch this space. I appreciate your comments. Thank you.

BullwipBullwipover 7 years ago

Great storey, hope to read more about these two as they learn more about each other

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good writing!

I accidentally clicked 1 star. 5 star writing. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good start

They seem to have enjoyed this. Give him bit of sexy chest hair and give them more loving!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Reminds me of my housekeeper in Nigeria

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