All Comments on 'Pawn Among Wolves Ch. 17 Extended Scene'

Synchronized smooching lol. I have loved all of your story. Maybe it was because it has been a while, but this chapter seemed a bit confusing. I loved seeing more of my favorite characters though. Mac and Gemma's love and lust are so addicting to read- I feel like I am right there in the moment! Would love to see more. Keep up the excellent work.

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I have read this story so many times. I absolutely love it and keep coming back to it again and again. You are a great writer. All the best!!

I found and started your story a couple of days ago and just finished the whole thing today. IT IS SO AMAZING!!! Wonderfully thought out, well written and just amazing! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this beautiful story!

Hello there , I have read all in this series. And loved them all , I won't go on and on about what a great writer I think you are ,.LOL.... What I will say is this, I do love how at the end of all the chapters you've said how much it Means to you that people like what you have Wrote, and how pleased you are with Their response. Don't know if you plan to add to this story, personally I would love to see more way more, there is so many different things you could expand on, like how all of the victims deal with finally getting free, and the trauma of dealing with the pain they've gone trough ! thats just one thought , another is picchu's love of her wolf. and the wanting to give him children, or in this case cub's. most parents want their children to give them grand children, It's truely the only way we get to get back at them as adults by spoiling their kid's you know too much sugar before they go home for the night ,candy bar's and soft drinks have always worked wonders for getting the loved grand children a sugar high just before going home. while it may be Love , it's definitely pay back in full,, lol,, And I love how you give hope too those too weak to care for them selves, And I too believe in Lead be example, being the one to show how It's done is so much more rewarding, than just telling somebody to go do it .. Theirs a lot that needs to be done with this pack of wolves, Besides righting all the wrongs ,and the death of those who caused it to be this way .Won't Heal the one's who lived it, while the influence will be gone ..Mac still has a lot to heal from, the same being said for the old warlord, Pain is pain,and the conflict it causes,or inter turmoil that arises from the constant pain ,and doubt's , Mostly i believe it's the what if's, what if I had done things differently or could have 's . Thank you for this story loved it a lot

I clicked on this series thinking it was smut, but three sleepless nights later I found that I'd read a love story. I'm not a furry, but this series's character development, plot, and writing style blew my mind and warmed my heart.

Amazing!!! Love some of the things answered Especially when Ulf was “there” I also forgot your sense of humor is So Awesome! You hit us with it when you don’t expect it and at times where you didn’t know it but it was NEEDED!! I too would LOVE to hear BOTH couples have multiple children!!! Same with Adam and Ada and I with the help of all those around him Adam WON’T go berserk!!! I either didn’t notice it or missed it but he’d been Married Before!!! Wow!! Those Greys and Faulks UGH!!! Oh and I can picture lil Gem going through, up and down those ventilation shafts! And I LOVE the lil video of it in my head!!! I know there’s more I’d Love to say but can’t remember! So I shall leave you once again Most Gracious Of Authors Madam Alfamme!!! 😘

!WOW! The only story so far to actually inspire me to create an account to leave feedback. Great plot-lines - keeping us in suspense right to the final chapter with those very believable adversaries - both the sadistic duo and the warlord / dictator on the march. The plot was so good that I confess I started to speed read some of the naughty bits to get back to the plot - with the result that I got to the end and to read EVERYTHING again, from the beginning! I'd buy the book 100% - if only to share with those friends where I'm not sure I'd confess to being a literotica fan. I guess you wrote it so long ago you've moved on - but please believe its worth publishing, if only to stop someone else publishing and to ensure you get the film /tv rights. Much better plot than Queens Gambit e.g. and I read that when it first came out. Needs tidy up for publication, especially for some cohesion and transitions - but so worth doing. I was thinking the first chapter really drops the reader in the deep end at speed - which does ensure you will only get enthusiasts sticking with chapter 2 - but maybe you could make it clear on the cover page what the reader is buying and give slightly more lead in before the first drama. How come the photographer ended up sharing a flat with the metallurgist? who got the flat first and what was the circumstance of their first meeting? Would love the sequels too if you ever write them so please please publish and let us know its you when you do so we don't buy from someone who steals your book. Thanks again (and please finish your other book too - its also great and I read this one because it isn't finished!) kind regards / A major fan.

Well done! I was held captive for 3 days reading. So hard to put it down to sleep. I hope to see more of your writing

Love the extra bits you added!