All Comments on 'Pay It Forward Ch. 07'

very enjoyable looking forward to reading more

Just read the chapters up to here. I like it. What a great group of characters. Thanks

After reading part 7. the story still hold me to want to read on to chapter 8 .

so far this story has being like a journey through life . at time dull but then things change to being exciting as of this part of chapter seven ,

like that book you some times fine and begin to read not able to stop till that last page id read . now comes to your stories . they have the kind of magic.

of being spell bound to read right up the the end of part after part. then wishing for more . that how i see your stories. so look forward to each new one. as i sure their will be many more flowing from your pen . so to speak . keep up the great work of writing . you are a born writer ,

I've read all 7 chapters up to this point, and I do enjoy the overall story. However, I would encourage you to get an editor to help you with the writing some. You consistently use wrong words and sometimes fragment sentences that break the flow of the story somewhat. A great story, though. It just needs someone to help you polish it up.

One more and I'm caught up, can't wait........