All Comments on 'Payal Submits Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
excellent!

Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
love it

Love it. but more hassan and payal. forget the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
awesome mausam

more more more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Will payal come out of her submissive mode?

That would be really hot.

I always wanted rekha from house wife or a whore to cast aside a politician

Anyways waiting for your next

lolabclovalolabclovaover 9 years ago
please continue!!

loved the payal series...please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Copied story

Since when did Indian women shout mama for mother? This story is copied from asstr...search and ye shall find

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sexy Story. Do Continue

Hello Tantrik,

continue the story and make payal their slave with bondage and mind fuck, keeping her on verge of sexual height and then dusappointing her often with some rewards here and there. You have a charm of making stories interesting.

I am from Mumbai. If you want to meet and explore possibilities, mail me at aryan_master@yahoo.com

Regards,

Aryan

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
YES Encourage him to copy more stories!

I just checked on what a previous person, Anonymous wrote: yes this story is copied from an Amercian story on another website...shame on the writer! But it was a nice story though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Continue this hot story

Continue more. I like such women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Payal

loved the story make payal do more things and get good position in politics

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Paypal

I find PayPal to be a very handy tool. Payal is just a handy fool.

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