All Comments on 'Payback'

Well written and very descrptive.

Ooooh, so very nice. Loved her being shaved by him, so intimate and erotic. That's how I like to keep mine so I know just how soft and silky it feels, with a hint of natural too. Would like to read more, especially with the camera in use.

The female character is a typical abuse victim

Not a very erotic story

write some chapters including pregnant sex.

Very Hot. Well written, A truly erotic story written by a guy. Way cool, please write more

Don't you complete your stories?

For sharing.

but I am sorry I didn't skip past this one.

no emotion. no caring. no eroticism. nothing to care about.