All Comments on 'Paying Guest'

I realise English isn't your first language, but I"m sorry. This is unreadable.

This story was electric! Glad to find something out of the ordinary. You should throw out all comments that are anonymous.

Congratulations on writing an interesting and erotic story, and that is what this site is supposed to be a.all about You certainly did better writing the story in English as a second language than I could have done writing in your native language. This is clearly a five star effort and I hope you keep up the good work.

And to those who "make allowances" for English not being your first language - who requested that you write in English, and why are you not working hard at Microsoft's call centre like you should be?

Seriously, this is unreadable, puerile, and typically formulaic trash from the bottom of a culture that has little (if any) respect for civilised norms - surely there must be a site somewhere for functional illiterates that you could frequent rather?

I love the rhythms of your language -- they match the rhythms of the male characters in your stories. So much in this story -- double penetration, incest...To watch a new cock disappear in one's wife, or Mom, or....Very erotic. Keep scribbling and we'll keep stroking. Thnks!

Love ❤ it: 4.65 = 93% (💜💙💚💛❤-)!

(I am a suckered for Indian wife sex stories.)

Excellent: 5- [4.6 = 92% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟-)].

This story was written from the heart (❤). This is an amateur site, yet the author managed to tell us a complete story on less than a page.

In my book, this story is not only erotic but it is also romantic. It reads easy.

Last but not least, Vijaya is a keeper and a trooper.

Your wife Vijaya got real lucky. Didn’t you wish that Murli was staying with you longer?