All Comments on 'Paying the Debt Ch. 04'

Borderline to porn, we hope, will NOT be crossed. This writer needs to pay more attention to spelling and punctuation. Otherwise, a pretty good read.

Previous comments have highlighted the author's difficulties with language. It is really a shame that such a good story is spoiled by continual grammatical and spelling errors. Word would correct most of them easily, or just getting a friend to read it may help; it would even be better to leave out longer words of which the author is unsure. This is not a criticism of the author's knowledge of English grammar: everyone has their weak areas, but of his inability to use basic software tools which would make the stories so much more enjoyable to read.

Hope you take the advice this time, and good luck with episode 5.

Chris

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