All Comments on 'Paying the Rent'

Great story, she better set some reasonable ground rules though or he'll be over to fuck her every day.

Fun read. I love older guys and the plot is classic porno. I feel like the story gets a little tangled when you start writing from both the man and woman's perspective. I think if you write about what he is doing from her perspective rather than switching point of view it might go smoother, though some of his inner thoughts during the scene were hilarious.

Very hot, thanks for submitting it.