All Comments on 'Payment in Kind Ch. 01'

And see how this goes, writing is good, just not sure about the story, thanks.

With any luck hubby will find out, have friends in low places too, maybe a badass brother and acquire an RPG and blow the shitty bad guy, his whoring wife and all his henchmen back to hell where they belong and them marry a decent and intelligent woman, unlike this moronic whore he got the first time. Good luck with the rest of this mess.

Cant wait for the rest. Exactly the way its going. = )

Yet another unfinished storyline.

what a waste of time.